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MY HIGH SCHOOL CREATIVE WRITING TEACHER

MY HIGH SCHOOL CREATIVE WRITING TEACHER

i don’t think about him much
he wasn’t very good

and i wasn’t either

but marked in red pen

at the top
of my first poem for class

he wrote—
“Watch your use of cliches.”

it hurt so freakin bad
to read that

i learned
i shouldn’t use them

and now all these years later
i can see one in a poem

they stick out like they were
written in red

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Daniel J. Flore III